Today in class we are continuing to look at students narrative writing from around the world as examples to get us focussed for our last unit of writing this year. Yesterday we were looking at Emily's work in the UK. Today we are looking at the work of Sam's brother from Dunedin. Sam is a student in Dunedin at St Clairs School, in Room Nine. The original post of Sams is here, and her brothers original post is here.
Hi Room 5
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for responding to Isaac's description about the storm. He was soooooo excited to have people beyond his family and teacher commenting on his writing. We think your idea of continuing it further is a great one and would love to see some finished results.
As a class we enjoyed having your questions because we have been learning about open and closed questions and we were able to identify which ones were the better questions and why. We are now working on writing our own questions so that the can 'interview' (imaginary we know) one of the characters out of Enid Blyton's book The Magic Faraway Tree.
Look forward to seeing your writing.
Room 12, St Clair School, Dunedin
Room Twelve
ReplyDeletethanks for your comments we enjoyed using Isaac's description as a piece of narrative writing and it was enjoyable for the students to be able to leave a comment directly to the author. He did such a good job.