tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112265701362847312.post5047760146635863226..comments2023-07-27T21:22:27.337+12:00Comments on Room 5 @ Melville Intermediate School: Melville Intermediate - Recount Writing ElizabethM Webbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04213006352175006579noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112265701362847312.post-60794577257138975912013-02-20T08:50:07.011+13:002013-02-20T08:50:07.011+13:00Hello again, Elizabeth,
Your recount is of a very...Hello again, Elizabeth,<br /><br />Your recount is of a very high standard, well done. I loved what you did with your 'play on words' with 'Pitch Black': Using it as a title, then using it as a description of the theatre and then introducing the villain of the film all as 'Pitch Black.'<br /><br />I also liked that you played around with time. Beginning two minutes into your account and then going back in time by two minutes.<br /><br />You gave a very detailed account of the movie. Even though you gave lots of detail, your account was clear. I think you judged it well. You didn't give us too much information ...or too little either.<br /><br />I applaud all the adjectives you used to describe the characters.<br /><br />What a very good analysis of Santa you wrote. He seemed to have layers to his personality (like an onion <br /><br />I liked your summing up at the end too. Having heard so much about this movie now, from your class and my own, I can’t wait till it comes out on DVD either.<br /><br />With every good wish<br />Merry Beau and 2nd Class Room 6<br />2nd Class Room 6 and their Teacher (Merry Beau)http://merrybeau.edublogs.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112265701362847312.post-14179960044631596032013-02-18T14:38:06.335+13:002013-02-18T14:38:06.335+13:00Hi Elizabeth,
Great story Its really descreptive,
...Hi Elizabeth,<br />Great story Its really descreptive,<br />I had a look at all your hyperlinks,<br />Thanks for commenting on my post.<br /><br />JAmie<br />Melville Intermediate<br />Room 5<br />Hamilton<br />New ZealandJamiehttp://melvilleroom8.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112265701362847312.post-34369643987428624382013-02-16T19:59:54.104+13:002013-02-16T19:59:54.104+13:00Hi Elizabeth,
I thought that your description of t...Hi Elizabeth,<br />I thought that your description of the characters from the movie was very well detailed. My favourite character was Jack Frost because every time he touched something with his magic, something magnificent happened and he was a lot of fun. But I liked the Sandman too, he could create aeroplanes and big dinosaurs with his magical dust. Who was your favourite character and why?Dariushttp://www.pesdariusl.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com